Poetry With Soul

...Yeah, I suck at puns.

Welcome to the thread where I will be posting some of my poems; I've never told anyone here, but apart from RP'ing, I also do poetry. I hope you will enjoy my works~

Love
Love is all around us
It’s truly wondrous
How love brightens every life
And frees the world from any strife

A wonderful feeling
In mind and heart
A broken heart healing
Makes anger depart

When butterflies fly
Trough your head
Sadness will die
And happiness
Will come instead

For the school paper originally, but I was too late to enter it. So, you guys are the first to read it~

Ode to Humankind

Ode to Humankind

When storms will rage across the globe
And waves will pierce the land
There will still be hope
Humankind will work together, as it will demand

When volcanoes burst
And earthquakes will destroy the Earth
Most of our kind will die out, at worst
But some will remain at health

The mentality of survival is stronger than it might seem
Humans will always thrive
As long as we form a group, a team
Our species will survive

I find this one quite suckish. I made it it because I felt like it.

So, any comments?

you did a good job

to tell the truth, i write poems sometimes, but most of them aren't that good

Sometimes
I just want to run.
From the cold, the rain
From the heat, the dryness

Sometimes
I just want to run.
From the sadness, the anger
From depression and anxiety

Sometimes
I just
Want
To run.

Away.

~~~

Why, does this sound slightly emo. Again, because I felt like it :p

I really like your poems. They have a sort of rhythm to them. I really like the last one. It's not too long and not too short.
I bet you spent a lot of time on these. They're good.

Yeeeeaaaah.

I should really update this more often.

Anyway; Thanks Layene, and thanks Pyro~

My newest addition;

Divided

Yin
And Yang

Pieces
Of a puzzle

Halves
Of an apple

Born together
And then divided
Or born divided
And brought together

From one
To two
Or from two
To one

Halves

So very different

And yet

So very much the same


(Simple and short, but I quite like it.)

Valentines

Happy Valentine
A red card
From nobody
Just something nice
by the student council

I look around
And see you
Smiling
Blushing
I wrote that card

To me,
Valentine
Would only be a good time
If you
Wrote mine.


(Why are all my latest poem so sadface? >> )

If my computer keyboard had the symol for not equal to I'd use it, but since it doesn't, I'm gonna put an asterisk there instead okay? So, here goes.

Sad poems * Bad poems

Just imagine that not equal to sign there. Because, those are so good. So good. That I kinda want to be as awesome as that. Okay not kinda, REALLY want to be that good. They're not too long but they're not just tiny little rhymes or anything either. I love them.

Whatyes this is still alive.

-Springtime's Skies-

Where, yesterday
Whispy white ghosts
burrowed trough the
endless cold

Today,
spring's wooly lambs
lazily chase
Each other

I like your poems in general, but this newest one is great. I can totally relate to it. Good to have you back! ^^

Dark ^^

You have a particular style to your poems that makes them short and meaningful without being to soppy or gimmicky. Your latest one is pretty good, and it captures Spring very well, again without being overly sweet (especially as Spring is such a potential subject for sillyness)
Looking forward to seeing more.

In Those Eyes

So much despair
Yet so much understanding
In those eyes

So much pain
Yet so much hope
In those eyes

Tears running down
Light shining in

The black bristles
And peach velvet

The proof
Of a life much longer
Then a lifetime

What a world
In those eyes.