The Wondrous Weed-Pit (Requests are OPEN)

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Weeds
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Posted on: Tue Nov 23, 2010 3:31 pm
Welcome to my sprite thread, even though the name is lame and I totally sat here too long trying to come up with a pun that would include my username~

As of now I take requests. Some basic request rules are:
  • Only stuff that you've seen in this thread (i.e no Christmas sprites, but Fusemon are ok)
  • No trainer sprites. I don't think I can manage them yet ^^; Requests for trainer sprites are now open as well ^^
  • Please comment on my work before requesting. If you don't your request will be ignored.
  • Only one request per person at a time.
  • If you post here asking when your request will be done I will ignore the request. I don't like to be rushed :X
That was a lot more rules than I'd expected D: I look like a really stern person now... :.<

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This is an alternate outfit for Flint, one of the Sinnoh Elite Four. I'm happy with how he turned out, even though he was supposed to be on a snowboard. That proved to be beyond my spriting skills.

So, I would like to have some comments please :) And please be civil and follow all the rules of Pokecharms while posting.
Last edited by Weeds on Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:06 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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The AMAZING sprites were made by Tun and Indie (Solstice) respectively. Thank you so much!~
The incredible siggy was made by PKMN Trainer L, so a big thank you to him as well!~
Click here to go to The Wondrous Weed-Pit, and here to go to my fic, Intro: End of the Road

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snetonobre
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Posted on: Tue Nov 23, 2010 10:32 pm
Wow! Really cool, man ;D.

But some comments, in the order you posted the sprites:
1)Noctowl is the final stage of Generation II "Early Bird" (y' know, the birds you find on the beggining of each game). So, you forgot him.

2)The eyes are veeeeery strange :o. I know they are from that fossil (what was his name again?) but they make this fusion extreeeeeemely strange. Also, to make it less like Toxicroak, try changing his hand, and removes the "strange thing where his chin is supposed to be"(I don't really knows that thing name).

3)Hmmmm... Well, it's not a bad idea, but it doesn't look like a Pokémon. It looks like a poor drawed thing done by a kindergarten kid (but I know you picked up parts from koffing and tentacruel, and scratched the part you hold it), but to make it better you just need to add more parts. No sprite will look good by picking parts of only two different pokémon, unless the intention was to be a literal fusion. But the idea is cool, I even think I'll also work on a umbrella fakemon too.

4)Crazy. Reeeaaally crazy.

5)Well, it really is what you described, though I don't think any spriter here could do any better.

6)Well, you should improve the shading of his collar, and since his not on a snowboard, try changing his arms. It's awkward :o. Also, it doesn't look like Flint without that smile of his.

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Posted on: Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:22 pm
snetonobre wrote:3)Hmmmm... Well, it's not a bad idea, but it doesn't look like a Pokémon. It looks like a poor drawed thing done by a kindergarten kid (but I know you picked up parts from koffing and tentacruel, and scratched the part you hold it), but to make it better you just need to add more parts. No sprite will look good by picking parts of only two different pokémon, unless the intention was to be a literal fusion. But the idea is cool, I even think I'll also work on a umbrella fakemon too.


It looks more like a Pokemon than those Ice Creams Gen V has thrown at us. Just watch your criticism style, there's a fine line between constructive criticism and being unnecessarily rude.

Anyway...

I really like Derpbird, he made me smile. You fuse things together quite nicely, the lines on Derpbird all flow into each other perfectly. The only tiny mistake I can see is on Neokiller, who has a stray black pixel under his foot.
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Posted on: Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:10 pm
Thanks guys! Always makes one happy to get comments :)

Silver Magpie wrote:The only tiny mistake I can see is on Neokiller, who has a stray black pixel under his foot.


That must've accidentally come along while I was moving him around. Might want to edit that. Also if you zoom in you can actually find lots of stray pixels on all of them |D But since you really can't see them as they are I didn't bother editing them.

snetonobre wrote:1)Noctowl is the final stage of Generation II "Early Bird" (y' know, the birds you find on the beggining of each game). So, you forgot him.


I deliberately left out Noctowl, since I consider Pidgey to be the "Early Bird" of Johto. After all, Hoothoot only appears at night.

I found some old stuff on our home computer, so I might post that later this week. (Most of it is pretty crap, but still...)
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The AMAZING sprites were made by Tun and Indie (Solstice) respectively. Thank you so much!~
The incredible siggy was made by PKMN Trainer L, so a big thank you to him as well!~
Click here to go to The Wondrous Weed-Pit, and here to go to my fic, Intro: End of the Road

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Posted on: Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:50 pm
Magpie, I know that was cruel, but I said it the less cruel way I could. I never lies, I always tells the blunt truth, not because of somekind of honor, but because I'm really incapable of telling a lie.

Weeds, if that's the case okay. Also, please, don't think I was criticizing you, it was just a comment. It passed in my mind that maybe you left it out deliberately.

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Posted on: Wed Nov 24, 2010 5:04 pm
Wow! I've been waiting for a derp umbrella Pokemon! Great job!
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Posted on: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:36 pm
Wow Weeds this thread is fantastic!
That first Pokemon Fusion of Swellow, Pidgeot and Staraptor has been done extremely well and I can tell you worked hard on it~
Everything about it looks great~

I really like Neokiller a lot :>
He just has that... kind of futuristic sleekness about him that I can't help but adore <3
Personally, I think the eye you've equipped him with suits him wonderfully; it matches that sly grin on his chops and made me smile too!

Derpbird... what else can I say but #win!

And I love that Axel sprite! His posture looks fantastic, as does his hair! I can't zoom in enough to check, but does h have those marks under each eye~?
It still has been very well done! Do you plan on doing anymore of the Kingdom Hearts/2 line~?
I'd sure love to see them!

Excellent job Weeds!
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Posted on: Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:46 pm
Well, at first I would write "why this post have so few posts? Your sprites deserve more than that."

But you can't expect more posts if you don't post new sprites. This thread will soon die if it keeps this rhythm. Rhythm zero.

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Posted on: Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:39 pm
Thank you everyone for your constructive criticism! Always makes me happy to see comments here! ^^

kasumi_slater wrote:It still has been very well done! Do you plan on doing anymore of the Kingdom Hearts/2 line~?
I'd sure love to see them!


Actually I have been thinking about doing some more of them. Only problem is that Sora's and Roxas's hairs scare me... :P

But, right on time with Snetonobre's lovely little post, here is some new material for you guys!

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This one I'm very proud of. It is a revamp of Hitmonlee's Gold sprite. When I showed it to my brother beside the D/P Hitmonlee sprite, he asked me which one was the one I'd revamped. Personal victory! ^^

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This here is my attempt at lineless spriting. It's not too good, as it's one arm completely vanished :-\ But, I am working on another lineless at the moment, and it's looking much better.

And, to celebrate myself beating Metroid Prime for the first time, here is a sprite of everyone's favorite female space bounty hunter;

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I'm pretty proud of this one as well. I give all credit to Tun's wonderful tutorial for helping manage this one. I think the hair is a bit off, but I can live with that ^^
TRIVIA: If you zoom in on the Pokeball in her hand, you can see that it's based on a Metroid, with all the colors taken from Super Metroid.

That's all fer now folks, but I'll be back soon with more interesting sprites for you guys!
Last edited by Weeds on Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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The AMAZING sprites were made by Tun and Indie (Solstice) respectively. Thank you so much!~
The incredible siggy was made by PKMN Trainer L, so a big thank you to him as well!~
Click here to go to The Wondrous Weed-Pit, and here to go to my fic, Intro: End of the Road

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Posted on: Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:59 pm
Looking pretty good, your revamp is excellent, I always loved that posed too :P

For the lineless, the trick would be to add a tad bit of shading and that would make that arm come back :P
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Posted on: Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:41 am
|Lineless Typhlosion~<333
You're really spiffing at doing lineless' :>

Hitmonlee's pose has been rvamped perfectly!!
I showed it to my brother too, and he said "Is that the Pearl Hitmonlee?"
(he got Diamond and is a little slow xD)
I'm thoroughly impressed!

Can't wait to see more of your sprites Weeds~<33
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Posted on: Fri Dec 03, 2010 11:33 am
My god that Hitmonlee is awesome. I thought it was a really really good scratch. Then I read the writing. Which just made it even more awesome, because it looks so... offical. 'specally in the shading.

Weeds, I didn't even notice that the arm in that Typhlosion was missing until you pointed it out. It looks wonderful, and if that's your first go I can't wait to see what your second is!

Neokiller is so cool. I want one! I think the thing that pulls it all together is those eyes. They make it less of a Toxicroak, and more of a Neokiller or whatever because of them.

First time I saw your birds fusion I was like "Ooh Breloom must have been used!" Yeah well I was proven wrong... Its still awesome.

Umbrella 'mon ^^
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Posted on: Wed Dec 08, 2010 6:38 pm
Thanks for the wonderful comments guys ^^ I approve of this positive response my sprites have been getting :D
So, I finally have a virus protection system on my laptop, so I dared opening photobucket ^^; I've been around on the net without any protection, which is not very good :x

So without further ado;

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BABOOM. I like this. The left horn looks a bit light because of all the black outline being removed, but that's no big deal.

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So, revamp of Gold Umbreon and devamp of Diamond ^^ The revamp isn't too good now that I look at it, The front leg is way too thick. But hey, that's how it was on the Gold one as well. I had to scratch the eye on it, cos the original looked a little awkward. The devamp, however I'm much more satisfied with. I had to scratch the eye again, but it turned out nice in my opinion.

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This one's pretty fun I think. It's a Golem trying to be an Electrode! :D It's basically just a recolor, but it was a tricky recolor D:< The white on top kinda looks like snow :>

And now, for the apple of my eye;

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Now this one I'm really proud of. I love how it came out. Personally I think this is my best linenless so far. And I probably won't be producing anything this good anytime soon xD
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The AMAZING sprites were made by Tun and Indie (Solstice) respectively. Thank you so much!~
The incredible siggy was made by PKMN Trainer L, so a big thank you to him as well!~
Click here to go to The Wondrous Weed-Pit, and here to go to my fic, Intro: End of the Road

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Posted on: Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:04 pm
Hello again peypolz! It's been a while, but now I'm back with quite a bunch of material.

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This is NOT a Chimchar-Mime Jr. fusion. It's a Chimchar cosplaying as a Mime Jr. If you look closely you see the flame-tail :> I like how it came out.

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I remember reading that someone thought Shiny Gallade looked like Mudkip. So I did this. That's all there is to say about it really xD

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More lineless! Scizor is my favorite Pokemon, so I figured I'd give a shot at a lineless one. I'm satisfied with it.

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More remakes! I was checking through my Gold Sprite Sheet, and I thought that this looked re-makable. I remember the spiral being troublesome, for some reason...

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This one came out really good. Revamp of Gold Vaporeon. I think this one is as good as the Hitmonlee one. I am very, very happy. ^^

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Here are Porzap and Oinkbuzz respectively :D I did Oinkbuzz first, I thought Grumpig recieved way too little love (and it totally does) and decided to do something with it. After making this, I just had to make a prevolution :) I think Oinkbuzz is more creative, but I like both :)

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This is for the Charms Christmas ornament thingymabober RX posted. It has nothing to do with Christmas but I'm extremely satisfied :3
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The AMAZING sprites were made by Tun and Indie (Solstice) respectively. Thank you so much!~
The incredible siggy was made by PKMN Trainer L, so a big thank you to him as well!~
Click here to go to The Wondrous Weed-Pit, and here to go to my fic, Intro: End of the Road

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Posted on: Mon Dec 20, 2010 8:46 pm
Kyaa, Weeds!! <3

I love your latest work- the revamps are Gold~!! (Pun intended)
I especially agree with you about Vaporeon- he looks simply FANTASTIC. You've done a super job, as well as on Poliwhirl, but Vaporeon pulls ahead in the revamp race for me :>

My brother loves Scizor too! Sometimes it's hard to believe you aren't the same person ^//u//^
The lineless looks so clean and well done and just... BLEH *love spammage*

HOMIJEBUSWORD- Porzap. Awesome never looked so springy and pink. I love it! Oinkbuzz is cute too, but you've really outdone yourself with little Porzap!

Nyaa, I am so gonna draw you fanart of him *//3//*

Keep on spriting, Lovely Weeds!<3
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Posted on: Mon Dec 20, 2010 8:59 pm
You are my favourite type of weed (pun). Great artwork.
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Posted on: Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:18 pm
Weeds wrote:Image

I remember reading that someone thought Shiny Gallade looked like Mudkip.


...I think pretty much everyone agrees on that xD

The Gallpert/Swampade is my favourite, Weeds, but the others are very awesome as well<3 Porzap and Spoinkbuzz are great!~

Keep it up, Weeds~

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Posted on: Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:07 pm
Oh you guys~

Kasumi, you have no idea how happy it makes me to read posts like that~ Thank you for making my day, seriously ^^ (and maybe I am your brother >:D You never know ;) )

And thank you as well, Dark (or Tim, whatever you prefer to be called :> )! The Dutch joke just never gets old, does it? :D

And so this post isn't completely pointless... I've been thinking about it and decided that I shall start taking requests! But only for stuff that you've seen in this thread, and no trainer sprites. I don't think I can manage them too well yet ^^;
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The AMAZING sprites were made by Tun and Indie (Solstice) respectively. Thank you so much!~
The incredible siggy was made by PKMN Trainer L, so a big thank you to him as well!~
Click here to go to The Wondrous Weed-Pit, and here to go to my fic, Intro: End of the Road

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Posted on: Thu Dec 23, 2010 12:49 pm
Why haven't I told you how super-fantastic these sprites are already~?

The fusions are great, likewise the remakes. My favourite fusion would have to be the regional bird fusion. I <3 the fringe, and the rest of the sprite is seamless in its combination. The same can be said for the other fusions, especially "porzap's" line. That pair are lovely~

The lineless ampharos is done very well, nevermind that faint ear. Medicham comes in close second, but thats only because of my love of the mareep line.

I would like to request one of these wonderful sprites. Could you please sprite a fusion of Empoleon and Ampharos? Thanks in advance, and keep up spriting~
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Posted on: Sun Dec 26, 2010 5:26 pm
I hope all of you had a fantastic holiday! I'm back with some more work.

Indie's request;

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Tadaah! It's not too bad, even though the are where the right wing joins with the body looks a little bad. Have you requested this somewhere else? I think I remember seeing an Ampharos-Empoleon fusion somewhere...

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This lil' beast was just made for fun. I like how he turned out ^^
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The AMAZING sprites were made by Tun and Indie (Solstice) respectively. Thank you so much!~
The incredible siggy was made by PKMN Trainer L, so a big thank you to him as well!~
Click here to go to The Wondrous Weed-Pit, and here to go to my fic, Intro: End of the Road

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